I would say keep some of the more minor sections, outside of the introduction, very brief, save the details for conversations to be had on dates, first messages exchanged, etc.
From "my family/background" down it is excellent! I think to most mystery is more appealing than having all of the information up front. Be brief and show a little of your personality without giving specific details about yourself, let the men pursue and they will be overjoyed to if they find your beginning intro appealing. As for the pictures, I would say that 5-10 is a good amount of pictures, you don't want too too many, just enough.
you can read mine if you'd like, people have commented they enjoyed it before. Hope this helps and best of luck!