(quote) Christopher-1007273 said: Being - very nice pictures. The introduction and ideal match sections are very difficult to read because they contain too many sentence fragments and are not organized into paragraphs. Interview questions are difficult to answer (eg you asked what I last read and listed five self-help books; I don't read self-help.) Despite those concerns, though, you have a very warm, positive and attractive profile.
Thanking you Christopher for the constructive criticisms. And I just made a quick review and made changes accordingly (which incidentally coincided with the same advise that I got from a nice good friend and a gentleman whom I met here at CM). I really appreciate your insights.
I guess , I shall leave your profile to the next wonderful lady to read this.
I must say though that I found your profile wonderfully done. Very well constructed, detailed, and can sustain interest. You shared your inclinations on physical fitness, talents in Music and you have a good enjoyable career. It was well executed and you thoroughly explained "the other signicant details" that you wished to convey to whoever reads it. Over all, nice photos esp. when you were with your niece. Lastly, for your PIQs, you have interesting personal questions, they are good and not boring, indeed you had your personal style & uniqueness.